Letting Go – Afterthoughts
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Title: Letting Go – Afterthoughts
Genre: Personal Review
Rating: K
Inspiration: Letting Go (SongFic)
Started: November 7, 2008
Completed: November 7, 2008
Words: 224
So this is my personal review page for my story. I would probably always post a review page after each story, but it’s not mandatory. I guess I just need to vent out a little after I finish. A lot of my stories don’t end up the way I planned anyway.
I did promise that I’ll be true to every word of this story as I first wrote it a decade ago (crap) and I did! Although I can’t resist changing the ending and format a little. So technically it’s still the same plot, same words (I just had to revise the way some words were phrased and such), same characters. But the original ending actually ended with him crying at the picture and the song ending in the background and the “Goodbye Mike” thing. What I changed is that, I was more specific as to what picture he was looking at. The picture though added a whole new facet to the story since it obviously implied that Mike already got married and had a daughter. Ironically, the name of the daughter is Marcella (the closest female name I can think of, to Marc) and has Marc (the ex-lover) for a godfather (uhm godmother?!). I think that was a nice twist right. Sadistic, but nice. Haha. I’m so evil.
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